All Comments on 'Santa’s Secret Naughty List'

This being my first story ever written or posted I would love some feedback, positive or negative, so that I may use this to better my writing. I do hope you all enjoy the story!

This was a very erotic and a very fun Christmas story. It was also well written. If this is your first attempt at writing then I can only say carry on. Thanks for the story.

with sexual titillation. Actually these endlessly themed season competitions are tedious IMO. My bad for reading it. Your writing is very good and I'm sure I'd enjoy something much raunchier and more realistic from you. Here's hoping...Mancelt

i didnt know santa could be so dirty and i kind of didnt enjoy it becuz santa is jolly and is supposed to be married mrs. claus.

Well Well What More Can I Say!

Hot! Hot! Hot! I really enjoyed this story. As a woman who likes to be tied up, the candy cane ropes were a nice touch (where can I get some) I would also like a visit from Santa this year :)

Interesting at first, but then continuity & other mistakes.