All Comments on 'Fox & Fireman'

by Five_Eight

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Ah Now Come on!!!!

Gave you five stars for the so not in the holiday spirit ending. Bold to do that with a holiday story. Hope she's having a bad dream or pregnant. What do you think?

CaseyLynn326CaseyLynn326over 14 years ago
Whoa

It was a really good story until the ending. I'm like the other person who posted, please let it be a dream.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
interesting

gave the story five stars but do hope there is a happy ending hee someplace

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Loved it til the ending!

Loved it til the ending... Line of duty deaths for firefighters is NOTHING to take lightly...and I'm shocked anyone would ever put this in a story, especially on a site like this.

Five_EightFive_Eightover 14 years agoAuthor
A message from the author

Too many friends of mine are firemen for me to take line-of-duty deaths lightly. This story was dedicated to the firefighter heroes who perished helping others, especially those on 9-11-2001 and the dedication got omitted, my bad. Had the story ended with 'it was all a dream' it would've cheated the reader; if it concluded with 'and they screwed happily ever after' that would've been unrealistic. In real life people die every day, a sad fact.

Although Melissa didn't want it to end this way, Darryl would not have had it any other.

catman71catman71over 14 years ago
sad but real

upon reading that there was supposed to be a dedication i understand the story greatly and think it is one of the better ones i have seen more more more please

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Oh bleeeeugh

what's it all about? Who fockin cares.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
one of the best

One of the best.

this says it all

AcalAcalabout 14 years ago
Ending

The ending totally destroyed it for me. Completely unnecessary

MollyMaeMollyMaealmost 13 years ago
Love it Always

It was an awsome story! Gotta love a man in uniform :)

wolfmoon30wolfmoon30almost 8 years ago
True

What the story means love doesn't always end with happily ever after. Even though we wish it did. I love it. At least she has a great memory of him.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Noooooo

This story actually made me cry. Life is never to be taken for granted.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Beautiful

Beautiful story.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

That’s so sad 😭

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