All Comments on 'Brown Slut's Surprise Party'

I loved your story but would have liked a little more action. Please continue the story and write some others as well.

Good for you! If I was your boifriend, I'd go out and find the men for you, so you could have all the cock you wanted.

Very good, really hot. The dialogue was great! In so many stories the dialogue is just "oh", "yes", and "take it". It was so nice to read some dialogue that was really detailed, and having the girl dis one of the guys was great! Keep writing!

My sweetie has this as a favorite story and I can see why! You keep the pace going, your descriptions are just enough without going overboard, and your ideas are just nasty. Five stars isn't really enough!