All Comments on 'Snowed Inn'

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pouyqwertpouyqwertover 14 years ago
Great lead in and then...

Great build up of the characters and plot. But then, in a blink of an eye, it was over...

fighterpilotB4fighterpilotB4over 14 years ago
Well done!

A good read. The descriptions were very well thought out, as were the emotions she ran through. A little too quick to the sex part but certainly a woman's view.

humminbeanhumminbeanover 14 years ago
Nice one

Enjoyable, really appreciate the lady's perspective. Take some more time with the steamy bits and it could be very memorable.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
hmmm

She's usually really good with the kinky stuff. Check out her other work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Good Story

She is right, she's not ready for marriage, thanks.

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