This totally sucked.
I thought this was a decent enough story, and if I see another like it from the same author, I would read it. DON'T understand the other comment saying 'this sucked'! Why did it suck? Ok, so it's not shakespear, but I enjoyed it, and it was quite well written....
Good work - keep it up.....
a great succubus story! the negative poster below is a creep!
This is more erotic horror than anything. Was sort of an unpleasant surprise to find it in nonhuman.
Story was well written, nice job.
Wonderful story. Surprisingly pleasant end for Rod. Always love it when they make them work hard for their own demise...
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