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by Anonymous01/16/10

awful

This totally sucked.

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by Anonymous01/16/10

pretty good - I liked it.....

I thought this was a decent enough story, and if I see another like it from the same author, I would read it. DON'T understand the other comment saying 'this sucked'! Why did it suck? Ok, so it's not shakespear, but I enjoyed it, and it was quite well written....

Good work - keep it up.....

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by Anonymous01/17/10

nice!

a great succubus story! the negative poster below is a creep!

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by Anonymous01/17/10

OK, but wrong category

This is more erotic horror than anything. Was sort of an unpleasant surprise to find it in nonhuman.

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by Anonymous01/22/10

Nice job

Story was well written, nice job.

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by Ternom03/12/14

Wonderful story. Surprisingly pleasant end for Rod. Always love it when they make them work hard for their own demise...

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