All Comments on 'Nan's First Time'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Hot

Try expanding a bit as you're a good writter with a sense of heat. Please expand character personality next.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Woah

Wow That Sound Lovely I'd Love That So Much!

soniegirlsoniegirlalmost 11 years ago
WOW

WOW that was so good made me wish that it was me there

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Another WOW

Omg that was so amazing and wow.

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