All Comments on 'Isabelle's Awakening'

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BlueFinchBlueFinchover 14 years ago
Great start

I'm as confused as Isabella, but just like her, I'm enjoying the thrill of the ride in nervous anticipation of what could come next.

biscuit53biscuit53over 14 years ago
cant wait

i am interested on the next part of this...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Write more!

Seriously, this is great. Write more ASAP pleaaaaaase x

GrrrreatImaginationGrrrreatImaginationabout 11 years ago
A very good

introduction. I like your writing style, and I like the introspection of your main character. There's a slight chance that you're over-building her innocence with comments like "...and never associated her with sex. In fact, Isabelle kept well away from sex all together." I hardly think one could swap panties and not at least have to suppress some sex related thoughts.

In any event, you should write more. If the rest of the story is as interesting, I will be well pleased.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Why?πŸ˜—πŸ˜™πŸ˜šπŸ˜™

Why is it so short, its just a little teaser where is the rest of the story?? Once again no sex just a fucking tease. I mean please give us a little more sex!!

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