All Comments on 'Nosy Neighbor Ch. 02'

by gen_man69

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donkinkdonkinkabout 14 years ago
Nice,.....but where's the 'hot' nosy neighbor?

Keep on writing. thanks

Foxterot7aFoxterot7a5 days ago

Story remains well written and logically developed, as far as stepmother and son go. Cbharacters still require development. Likewise, it remains to be seen if the author can merge the subplot with the plot.

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