by ShatteredPortrait
I thought you did a very good job with this story and hope to see some more.
I believe that this is one of the most realistically sensual stories that I have ever read here on Lit. The way you unfolded the setting and introduced the characters flowed so smoothly, that it made your story all the more realistic. Seriously, everyone, at one point in time, has experienced being ditched by a friend. You played off that truth, added an empty house, arousal, and an innate curiosity to set the scene. I like the fact that you fully captured the varying range of emotions exactly as one would really feel if they had been caught in this situation. The hesitation and concern of Scott showed a gentleness that perfectly translated into sensuality. Great Job !