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Take the time to read your story before you publish your story. Get an editor to read it first. So many errors that if you read it first you have to see your errors. It would have been ten times better the errors distract from the enjoyment.

Written by a man

You really need to have this edited. "I just lied" means you just didn't tell the truth, for example.

I went to my friends lake cabin one weekend. It was Saturday morning. I had on my blue jean shorts and a white blouse with the sleaves cut out. Jenn made the commit about how short my shorts was, and told me to bend over and touch my toes. I'm getting excited as I'm thinking about it. I felt her behind me she rubbed my butt, and said see your cheeks are peaking out. I giggled and tried to stand up. She placed her hand on my neck and ask if I ever been with another girl. I said, no, but was courious what it would be like. That gave her the ok. Jenn grab hold of my wast band to pull my shorts father up my ass. She was rubbing my pussy with her hand and her thumb sliding between my ass cheeks. Her other hand was on my back than she reach around to feel my breast god the intense pleasure that shot through me was overwhelming. I gasped. Jenn stood me up, with my wast band took me to her bed room. I couldn't beleave what it felt like to be kissed by another girl. She unbutten my blouse and played with my breast with my bra on then she took my shirt off. Jenn told me to take my shorts off and she'll be back in a moment. There I was standing in the middle of the room in my panties and bra. Jenn came back in and ask, if I was sure I wanted to do this? I was. She kissed me and I felt her hand on pussy. She took my hand and put it down her pj's I touched something that shouldn't of been there. Jenn told me to get on my knees and pull down her jammies. She had on the biggest strap on I ever seen. She ask, if I would like to take it my mouth? I did, I couldn't get it all in. She told me that I would like it the way she and Becky did. Jenn pull me up from the floor. She then kiss me softly all over. She undid my bra,and slowly licked my breast and sucked on my nipples it felt so good. She slowly worked her way down my body. I felt her warm breath getting closer to my pussy I shook with anticipation. She pulled me to her as Jenn licked my socking pussy, I was trembling all over. She got on her feet took my hand and guided me to the bed, she was on top and whisper in my ear, you want it all don't you. Jenn took my panties down to my knees. Before I could say anything she was fucking me. She shoved it all inside my at once. I gasped for air, I never had something that huge inside me I was moaning both in pain and pleasure. I wanted her to stop but then I didn't. She just kept giving it all to me. I let out a giant scream when I cumm. Jenn held it inside me for a while. She pulled it out, and rolled me over on my stomach. She slid it between my ass cheeks, and told me to take my panties off. I told her that they was no way she was going to stick that thing in my ass. She said, oh, and pulled my panties off. Jenn graped my wast to get me into possition. I was fighting her a little. I told her to be gentle. She stuck it deep in side my pussy god it was like it went to my belly. She pulled it out, I felt the head go into my ass, she stopped for a second. Than shoved half of it in. I screamed you bitch, Jenn took it out just as the head was about to come out she pushed every inch inside my ass it hurt so much I had tears running down my face. I was screaming and moaning as she just fucked my ass. When I thought she was done she would give it to me again. I was cumming down both leggs. We go to the lake every weekend know. We discover a nice cove with Becky, but thats another story

girls are so much better at sucking pussy than men

I just hope and pray that it is true.