All Comments on 'Almost Caught!'

That was certainly a different scenario with some literally and figuratively hot sex.

And we are getting a sequel right?

hot, steamy, dirty, nasty, sex! Gotta love it. More please

I liked it, I really did. Best of luck to you in the contest.

DG

Please make a part 2. Please. Please. Great job!

...simply awesome. Best of luck to you!

Best of luck to you, a well-deserved 5.

I'm hoping for a second part to this story, just like many others I suspect.

Great imagination and timing

This story demands a sequel! Sexy pool party, sharing the girls. More!

One of the best Nude Day stories I've read. Good luck in the contest.

Great story, well written, good plot development, well done.

Very enjoyable fantasy, which turned out refreshingly different from what I was expecting. Strong in its dialogue and convincing in its detail. Nice - piece of writing, Tx.

you need to continue this storyline!!!

Some much detail none of which distracted. What a build to an incredible ending and a huge desire for more. Great story. Real like the "other couple" as well you turned them into something more than in the normal stories. Thanks!

A truly fantastic story. It had me hard from the beginning and never let up. ANY chance of continuing the plot line? I'd like to "see" the results!

I gotta be honest...I very nearly bailed on this story halfway thru page one because it was taking so long to develop, but im very glad I didn't!

I love 'girl next door' types especially when they have flat chests, big nipples and firm round asses, and your heroine did not disappoint.

I felt like I needed to consult an anatomy text or the kama sutra to visualize some of the positions they were in inside the playhouse, but the fucking action was hot and the emotion of best friends turned lovers was sincere.

very well written.

I give it one big cock, straight up!

Enjoyed the tale Tex, and the little twist at the end was a nice addition. Agree with the comments about having a hard time truly trying to visualize the positions inside such tight cramped quarters, but whatever the hell position they were in, the sex itself was hot and exciting.

Once again...a good read. Thank you

You write so well --- i enjoy all your work

That was one of the best stories ive read on literotiaca!!!

This is the first story I have read of your's. I'm impressed. I think I'll read a few more.

Richard

well written, humorous in the right places and very sexy. I really enjoyed reading it.

story. You change the pace so well. Keep on writing. You're one of the people I am trying to learn from, even when there isn't much explicit sex, which clearly was 'not' the case here.

old friends become better and deeper. TK U MLJ LV NV

Surely one of the most downright sexy stories on the site! Just simply a SIZZLER!! MORE of those would work!!!

I am new to this kind of writing, and really enjoyed this story. I thought your pacing and how you expressed it in dialog was very nice. I want to learn to do this.

Wonderful story. Noe have a pool party with neighbors

...and I was erect through most if this tale.

oldies become goodies, TK U MLJ LV NV

It put a big smile on my face.

so much wrong with this lame tale

I have a best friend like that too that I don't want to ruin the relationship with feelings. We've talked about it and we chose to stay friends just incase though.

I am so old it is hard for me to remember, LOL.

nostalgic, and fun, and verrrry hot (and well written, too, of course)!

Aureole is a halo of light surrounding a religious person in a painting. Breasts have an areola.

I really enjoyed this sweet little tale. Kudos!

Great story! Very hot! I would love to read a sequel

Bloody good.

Looking forward to reading the continued story.

Liked the story. Maybe for another nude day you can write it from the point of view of the couple in the pool.

A super story. A unique point of view. Well done.

Fun with sizzling sex scenes. The author is a master.

Man, u nailed it again. Awesome.

The main character has a girlfriend. This means hes a cheating scumbag. Since this story was not flagged for cheating it automatically gets a 1/5.

A great story. Although the details were nowhere near the same, it reminded me of my friend coming over once when I came home sick from work. And we wound up having sex for the first time. Great story. Worthy of 5 stars.

Another creative and enjoyable story. The line between friends and lovers can be very slim. 5 stars, to help counter the moronic anon who can't abide even a hint of cheating.

They were caught and put in the bait box for future use. Truly, I was suprised that the walls of the playhouse stood up under the pressure. It sounded as if there would be more in their friendship down the road.

I love a Romance, but see none here. The story hints strongly at swapping with Denise and her man. There is no love when there is swapping, is just lust and a fuck fest...

Good story...

Didn't like the hint of them swapping. Would have liked there to be some more romance in the aftermath.

It would be a big shame if they didn't end up together permanently.

Damn, no tears from this story but it sure is cute! Kinda reminds me of my first time, sure showed me how wonderful the female could be .......

very likable characters...young and horny..

like all boobs, esp petites, but sounds he might get to try some prime ex-lg soon...f

definitely think he should volunteer to to relieve her of her remaining cherry...

good one, thanks

The guy already has a girlfriend and he works for half the salary of his colleagues.

Not exactly a stand up genius.

Hot. Well done.

THIS IS NOT ROMANCE

A romance? Seriously, I couldn't think of a better category for this than erotic couplings.

A romance would have described the special relationship Jan and Derek have, just like the author did. But the guy either hadn't had a girlfriend or he'd at least part ways with her after he came together with Jan.

A big NO is the outlook of impending swapping.

Being just a detail in the scheme of things, Derek compared the fake tits of the daughter of the house with Jan's natural titties, concluding he liked the latter much better, as do I. After being caught he suddenly changes the assessment, calling the mature couple the epitome of beauty and sexiness, this time including the fake tits. I'd call this an inconsistency, one that results for me in sharing the guy's taste at first only to hit a wall when he changes his mind 180°.

On a side note, the way Jan's mammaries are described, small but with big (puffy) areola and nipples, they are likely still in the process of growing...

Kinda fun.

LeB

Excellent story, well told. I like the fact that our hero has misgivings and gets hard at small tits and big tits. I also like fact that they got caught, which is more what would happen in real life.

A little shallow in the telling but a 5 star tale nevertheless. A fun tale & a bit of a break from the terribly intenseness of the longer tales.

Bill S.

A tale told well. And worthy of a hot sequel.

Good job, thanks for sharing your work!

Real good

Commenters are saying there’s no romance. I disagree. Being friends since childhood creates a sense of intimacy. Allowing each other to express physically what they’ve likely considered many times… holding the trust that their friendship will survive it, and the added dimension to their relationship will only strengthen it. If that isn’t a love story, I don’t know what is. - This was much hotter than the first time I read it.

5 Stars as I also have skinny dipped with my best friend's sister . She was not a Virgin but sadly she was a pain in the ass .

Great story.

Hooked

I hope it works out for them!

Great story, invested from near the start. I'm a bit confused by the reviews criticizing the non-character girlfriend of 8 weeks. A barely experienced 19 year old with his best friend of 15 years. These two things aren't comparable. I felt those facts made the story more believable. The sexy naked neighbor is an author setting up for sequels and drama. Easy to make that leap with teenagers to boot. Full or hormones and inexperienced.

Maybe my third time, and still love it, your description of her body-LOVE petites...!

...both crazy horny...will be even better in a proper bed, after a shower, him able to recharge in minutes...

easy five/fave...

Rory was an asshole. MC's parents were even bigger ones. A crappy story

That was great! I could feel the heat and sweat, and Jan’s tight little body! Been there, but not right there. Desire delayed, the right circumstances, and damn! Thanks!