All Comments on 'Bus Ride'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
um..a little incomplete

great premise and beginning to the story...but is anyone going to get to fuck this little slut?

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Very promising

I really liked this story. It had great atmosphere.

A gang-bang scene at the end would have made it perfect.

lil_cockteaselil_cockteaseover 11 years ago
Gotta try that sometime.

Wow. This seems like a fun invitation to extend to all hot blooded males on those crowded long bus rides. I would certainly love this happening to me!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
good

I just wish she was wearing a skirt so they could lift it and fuck her from behind.

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