All Comments on 'Her Punishment'

Over all I enjoyed you story. Although I could have done without all the hitting, but thats only my opinion. I hope you plan to follow up with chapter 2, because there was was more to like than dislike.

and more vivid detail please of everything.

English would have been nice, instead of Californian, I'm still trying to get my head around someone wearing a Tank, what sort A1M1 Abrams Panzer, maybe a hot water tank? no too much slang too much unsaid too many details not covered and far far far too short.

HIGH EYE ENJOYED YOUR STORY, EYE AGREE THAT IT WAS TWO SHORT, BUTT IT IS ENTERTAINING, & THAT IS WHAT YOU WERE STRIVING FOUR.. SEW EWE ACCOMPLISHED WHAT EWE SET OUT TWO DEW..NOW FORE HER CLOTHING..CENTS DADDY HAS TOO HIT & RAPE , HER CHOICE OF ANY TANK WOOD BEE A DETERRENT REGARDING DADDIES ACTIONS..(-: EYE AGREE, EWE KNEED TWO ADD ANOTHER CHAPTER TOO THIS HEAR STORY, PLEASE..JO.B.T.W. I HOPE YOU ENJOYED THE COMMENTS AS MUCH AS I LIKED DREAMING IT UP (-: JO

i dint get the last line be very precise

The last line is meant to be a lead into chapter two. I just havent been able to finish it and post it.