that was funny thanks you for this story it is really enjoyable. I look forward to more Mechmanas.
great new chapter, please keep the chapters comming
Two new stories + Chapter 20. Was 20, the "pregnant pause"?
Great work. Thanks fer sharing on Lit. (see kingkey, submissions)
Welcome back with another great chapter! Clay is going to be a very busy Doc now!
Keep up the fantastic writing!!
Doc should re-read the Bible,as you sow so shall you reap springs to mind.A great series ,please keep it up,
K Welcome back and another great chapter. Really loved the twist at the end of the chapter. Keep up the great work.
Has this series finished, (please i hope not), i've enjoyed it emmensly, please continue
Enjoyed the series so far. Really great story line mixing sci fi and the history... Unique.
Do you plan on completing the story?
he's going to die laughing!
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