All Comments on 'One-Percent Adaptable'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Nice beginning

But then two things happened: (1) The seduction was too fast and the acquiescence showed no reluctance; (2) the sex just didn't happen -- the story was over.

Too bad.

fingers46fingers46almost 12 years ago
Good stuff

Nothing happened to me in Paris like this worse luck,very "nice" erotica,good work.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
From a (supposedly staid) Englishman

Abso-bloody-lutely brilliant!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
uncultured

Eating yogurt with an expired pull date doesn't give you "food poisoning"! That's absurd, and not something a good writer would allow in a completed work.

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