All Comments  for

More Than Just a Fairy Tale Ch. 08

byJaisen©
All
Comments (4)
by Anonymous

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Socially_Inept09/04/10

She fit right in.

Another good chapter to this series. I'm glad they are offically mates now. Well, in the wolf's point of view anyway. I look forward to the next chapter.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by cannd09/04/10

I liked how you had her assert herself at the office. I also was happy they talked about where the relationship was going. I always love it when the wolf has thoughts about her. It's funny to see how he thinks. It's cute that the wolf chose her as his mate first. I did feel like the chapter was too short this time. I felt like it was just starting when it ended. Looking forward to more in the next one.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by shifter9109/10/10

Can I just second everything that cannd said! I'm glad you've started to talk about the stuff w/ the prenup too - I think thats really something she would have to consider as they get serious. Please continue - glad you updated!

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Boundlife06/07/11

:)

It's nice to see equal opportunity employers in stories

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.

Click here to leave your own comment on this submission!  or
Back to More Than Just a Fairy Tale Ch. 08  or
More submissions by Jaisen.

Add a
Comment

Post a public comment on this submission (click here to send private anonymous feedback to the author instead).

Post comment as (click to select):

You may also listen to a recording of the characters.

Preview comment

Forgot your password?

Please wait

Change picture

Your current user avatar, all sizes:

Default size User Picture  Medium size User Picture  Small size User Picture  Tiny size User Picture

You have a new user avatar waiting for moderation.

Select new user avatar:

   Cancel