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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

Sounds like this will be an exciting story!

PLEASE continue the DOC series!!!!

gunnycdcgunnycdcover 13 years ago
chapter length

i love your stories kingkey, but i feel you would do better if your chapters were longer, one page and you just get into it, then you have to wait for the next one page chapter. would you please make your chapters longer, 2 or 3 pages at a minimum.

kingkeykingkeyover 13 years agoAuthor
Doc

I'm going to add to my other stories. Doc is just slow but I'm still working on it.

Kingkey

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Technical Quibble

Hydrogen is used in fusion reactors, not fission reactors.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Great story

Keep writing .

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