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by Anonymous

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by Skibum09/28/10

Very nice!

Great little story with a nice twist at the end!

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by angiquesophie09/28/10

lovely

nice and sweet.

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by Anonymous09/28/10

great twist

at the end, well done

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by fregen09/28/10

Sweet

I read Emily's phone conversation and was about to read on but then noticed the lack of gender specific pronouns. Hmmmm. Clever girl.

Thanks for sharing.

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by Anonymous09/28/10

Good

Good story and clever foreshadowing without giving away the twist that tied back very well. Just one tiny point: did Emily have red hair or strawberry blond? There is a difference.

Your plots are fresh and well designed. Keep writing!

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by Chagrined09/28/10

Good Job

didn't need sex. It was well done, Good foreshadowing. This was really well done. Keep writing!

Best regards C

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by ohio09/28/10

I agree:

short, sweet, and original, with a nice twist. Very well done!

Thanks, ohio

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by Britease09/28/10

Great

I love stories like this. Very well done. Sex scenes would have spoilt it.

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by Anonymous09/28/10

Very good!

Enjoyed the story! Thanks for sharing. Ohio, USA

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by energystar09/28/10

great job!

thanks!

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by Anonymous09/28/10

Keep it up!!

Even though you are a new author, all of your stories are interesting and well written. Sex or no sex, your stories are definitely worth reading. Keep on writing.

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by AmicusVerus09/28/10

Good story

Just right length. No real need for sex scenes in this one. Nice job.

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by Anonymous09/28/10

Damn!

Emily, girl, you didnt lose a moment. Great short story. a great guy is a rare find. and most are already taken.

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by Scorpio4409/28/10

Love the way you think!

An amazing tale constructed to perfection and with the sinister mind I admire! Thank you!

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by Anonymous09/28/10

Funny

Great story ! I was not sure about it when I started reading , thinking it was going to be a typical married woman bar seduction story < but you proved me wrong , Good Job !!!!! keep the stories coming .

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by bruce2209/28/10

You rack up a perfect score so far......

Superbly plotted and written!

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by Harryin VA09/28/10

fabulous story....

you are rapidly becoming one of my favorite writers. This went off in a direction I did NOT see...

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by Mousse909/28/10

Early bird catches the worm...

Although I had figured it out way before the end, it was still very funny to read, especially the reactions of the other girls. A funny short story, very nice.

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by Average_Writer09/28/10

Very good story.

I liked it a lot. I hope that Emily really does console MIke and help him feel better. Thanks for the story.

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by Deckview09/28/10

Perfect...

Great little story with a twist I did not see coming at all!

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by TXany09/28/10

Cute

Enjoyed the twist

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by Pistolpackinpete09/28/10

Good little tale if not ....

...as original as Scorpio,who tends to fawn these days said. And Harry didn't see this coming?

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by patricia5109/29/10

Delicious!

A delightful little twist and those other girls are already "also-rans" before they even knew the race had started. Well done.

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by jkneus09/29/10

Loved it

Great little story, didn't see the end coming until it got there. No sex, so what!

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by winterfoxx09/30/10

Superb !

Didn’t see the ending at all … love it!

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by Anonymous10/02/10

I seen the ending coming, but it didn't making it any less funny. Nice story. And please, I'd really like to see a humorous sequel showing Vicky's reaction to Emily and Mike hooking up.

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by cpete06/06/11

Got me!

Suckered me right to the end! nice job

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by DWornock08/10/11

3*** story that I rated 4****

Much too short but the ending was surprising.

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by woodmanone08/10/11

Well done

with the unexpected twist at the end. More about Emily and Mike please.

Thanks for your hard work.

Woodmanone

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by Anonymous08/12/11

giggle

teehee... snicker... snort... funny...

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by huedogg08/17/11

another good one Vulcez

just goes to show friendship only goes so far.....

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by puppydog3508/17/11

ok

I'm now giggling

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by Boros74908/17/11

Great!

very entertaining. Thanks!

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by chytown08/17/11

I like Your Style!!

I had to read this again. Keep the stories coming. Thank you.

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Nice!

That's funny stuff right there!

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by jiminab08/22/11

Very very good

Never saw that twist at the end. And the girls bailing out of the bar like a fire house just made me laugh. First in first served. Thanks for the laugh. Jim

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by Anonymous10/12/11

Oh Yea!

More please, more more more.

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by Anonymous10/19/11

Very Nicely Done

Didn't see that twist coming. Hope you'll come with more stories.

Regards, J [drazvich(at)live(dot)com]

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by Anonymous10/26/11

Please don't change your style

Please don't try to copy most everyone else on this site. Your stories are all the better for not having to slog through explicit scenes that don't really contribute to the plot. Leaving a place for the imagination is much more powerful than mere description. If all people want is graphic sex scenes, let them read in the erotic couplings section. Signed -Surreptitious

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by tazz31710/26/11

YOU USE WHAT YOU GOT WHEN YOU CAN

and hope its beneficial to all. TK U MLJ LV NV

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by C_frommn10/30/11

Love It!

The way the other Girls took so long to figure out their friend was Chasing the "Prize" lol.

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by nwhaler10/31/11

Excellent setup and twist

Good twist-in-the-tail(tale) plot

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by LegionsOfLies11/17/11

Wait a minute

What the fuck... What happened and where was I?

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by RePhil01/08/12

Brilliant Slight of Pen!

More please

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by Tavadelphin01/09/12

ROFLMAO

Clear as crystal to me well ahead of the ladies lol -

Perfect set up and one of them was going to Mike's that night no matter what - heh

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by Scorpio4401/10/12

What is it about quick thinking women?

A great story with the perfect realization at the end! Well written and strong premise.
Thank you.

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by FD4503/18/12

How did I miss this?

I liked it muchly.

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by betrayedbylove03/26/12

HA HA

Funny and sad is this tale.
What we actually have here are the future cheating wives of America.

FUCK "UM

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by RePhil04/04/12

Still a favorite

Thanks for the smile !

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by BTTap09/05/12

Spectacular

Funny, clever, remarkably true. Emily is a sly one. Positioning herself like that. Well done author!

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