All Comments on 'a Glock under her pillow'

One of the things I've often wondered about when I see three from the same person, is how much better would the one have been, if the writer hadn't been so busy writing the other two. Another thing I've wondered about, is if the writer had been forced to read others and comment would they see some of the mistakes and miscalls they might otherwise make. Not to single you out, you're just lucky I guess. You have some good stuff, good stuff can be made better, and from what I read of you, you can easily do it.