by hey1234a
Very nice story, pretty hot and erotic. I'd only suggest, slowing down a little bit and giving more detailed accounts of their encounter, but still a good story.
i thought this story was hot and sexy. i want this author to make another one just like this.
do you have to get everything into one pargraph. why cant you spin it for two or three and well let us all build up a bit. it was over far to fast , i didnt even get a chance to get my cock fully hard to its 8 ich size before the story was over........jonathan.
This story was so hot! Oh my gosh.
I'd love to see two dudes get it on!
Shame the author does not know how to spell, construct sentences properly, and mixes the characters up, for example, apparently the little guy was able to put his own ball in his mouth and suck it.