All Comments on 'Locker Room Fun'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Pretty hot

Very nice story, pretty hot and erotic. I'd only suggest, slowing down a little bit and giving more detailed accounts of their encounter, but still a good story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
i liked it

i thought this story was hot and sexy. i want this author to make another one just like this.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
why

do you have to get everything into one pargraph. why cant you spin it for two or three and well let us all build up a bit. it was over far to fast , i didnt even get a chance to get my cock fully hard to its 8 ich size before the story was over........jonathan.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
young love

the 1st one is the best!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
a comment

This story was so hot! Oh my gosh.

I'd love to see two dudes get it on!

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Shame the author does not know how to spell, construct sentences properly, and mixes the characters up, for example, apparently the little guy was able to put his own ball in his mouth and suck it.

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