by HungExecutive
Great story, keep it going. But have his mom resist at first and then cave in and become his toy
Do you really think that the conservative, loving mother, the prim and proper Lynn would really sink to such a level as to give in to her sinful carnal cravings? Hmmmmm....
But please, please don't have the mother give in and have sex with him. It's too unrealistic and at the moment this is a brilliant story of out of the ordinary hot sex. Please don't add incest into it. It definitely doesn't need anymore than it has. It's fucking awesome the way it is. Much better to leave the mother repressed and show the son's fun with Connie!
You are the master of the slow build, my friend. Kudos to a great story. Looking forward to more
As always I appreciate all types of feedback. Your's is certainly no different. While everyone seeks the approval of others, it is the critical comments that help us to learn. So in an effort to improve my writing, perhaps you could provide me with a link to your work so that I can continue to learn and better my craft from your experience and guidance.
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very hot story , I especially like the detailed descriptions of the scenes and bodies ; hopefully the will be a second part to this and make sur to include some facial cumshots (like in part 1)
Please continue with this story as it has got the scope to be devloped into more. Your writing is very good I can't wait for part 2.
I don't usually even like incest, which I can see is probably what the next installment will be, but I don't care as long as I get to read more of this!
can't wait for part 2 to arrive; I really like your style, so hopefully you come up with part 2 (or a new story) soon
Looking forward to part 2, when the sated Chris comes home to find his mother waiting impatiently for him... in an alluring negligee! Eventually, of course, Connie and Lynn will just have to learn to share!
"She had to touch and taste his virulent cock." Did Chris have a highly contagious STD?
I think you might have meant "Virile"
I WANT PART 2, PLEASEEEEEEEE
But pleaseeee, NO INCEST.
I want it only hunky chris and bitch connie. i want conie more naughty and bitchy in prt 2 and chris more hunky
Wow, that was one of the hottest stories I've ever read. Well done. Bring on Part 2.
Such an overheated MILF should inspire a young stud to a hot anal fucking with an ATM finish
Oh fuck yes that was amazing I'm too fucking horny right now. I want a huge cock in me lol
Good story. Hooe there will be a chapter 2 soon. Maybe Chris gets his mom and Connie pregnant or makes Connie his own personal slut. I am sure Connie would love to his slut if it meant she gets him inside her again