All Comments on 'Hypno Coin'

Nice start to the story. You need to continue the story and build more with the hypnosis and her feeling normal about the whole thing.

Let's face it, he has the power over a very sexy woman. Why wouldn't he, given the chance, fuck her brains out?

That's what's missing from the story, unless this is just the first chapter.

I'm sure he can find a way to have her agree that being his love slut is what she is really wanting, in fact perhaps that is why she has been treating him so rude since his father left, is she wants him as a lover.

What ever the author has in mind for the young stud, I hope to see more soon.

Thanks for the good read.

i liked it, little different from most, lok forward to some hot sex between them

This type of story is exactly why I check this site for new submissions every day. Please continue it.

I really liked it look forward to more.

"...sitting at the kitchen table in front of some collage work." COLLAGE? Cutting and pasting to create art?

"...stumbled across this stand coin with a spiral on it." this STAND coin? What does that mean?

Thanks.

Hope more to cum smiles

Keep writing, I like your story and want to know what happens next!

Love the story! Please tell me there is more~

story is well but there is some passage is hard to understand. make the passage easy in future. the story plot is well and different from many other story, good work, you should be continue this. and make some blackmailing mother also.

Excellent story, the plot is good and refreshing, I can't wait to see how the protagonist is going to solve the 20 minutes restriction and the memory issues to really start the fun with mommy.

I love the hypnosis theme so please continue using it (I wouldn't like to see this story becoming into one of those blackmail or love stories)

So thanks for sharing and keep the good work

Wank tanks are now empty....

man keep writing magic stories...

U r one of da best writer

How pathetic; this guy has keys to the Cadillac, his beautiful mom at his beck and call; instead of making love he chooses to act like a pimply teenager and just dump his load uselessly outside of her. What a waste of a golden moment....

could've done a bit more with the situation. more would be good and go a bit further

Wait... Whos scott

absolutely stupid!! and as unreal as it could possibly be.

Any chance you'll continue this one?

and i hope you write more of it ,,, good work !!!!!!!!!

PLEASE TRY NOT TO BE LIKE SOME OF THE OTHER WRITERS.THAT JUST LEAVE US HANGING. THIS KID HAS THE WORLD BY THE BALLS. LET HIM USE THEM.AND START WITH HIS MOM. ALSO WHAT'S MOM LOOK LIKE , AGE , BUILD, ALSO THE KID . KEEP IT GOING WE NEED MORE. THANK YOU A FAN

Really?

I liked it! Lucky kid.

Why no part 2 of this story??

I really wish their was more to this story, it's a good read. Hope the next one is just as good if not better and a few couple pages long. The things I would do would be omg. Yummy

Finish this story with a great ending. thanks

One problem I noticed, son went from "Tom" to "Scott" at one point on page 1

Id like it if you made another chapter

This could easily be a 30 chapter story it needs to be continued

With that coin. When she came back to normal the first time, you could have set up long lasting instructions such as you will dress like this from now on despite how much time goes by or something like that.

And why end this with thg h him only getting a BJ from her? Why not go all the way?

Is there going to more chapters?

I really liked the story, but I got a bit confused. Who is Scott? When did he come into the kitchen? Why didn't he get to play with her as well? Gave you a 5 anyways.

Need more of her being forced!

i think it is a good story tbh