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After the Affair

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by Anonymous

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by twelveoone01/25/11

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Susan must be your pet name. Always pays to rename your lovers.
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by Angeline01/25/11

Little slices of life

are so telling. I think you could get more from it with different line breaks but I always think that. And one nitpick: a typo in line three. Really good though: says a lot with few words.

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by fridayam01/25/11

I love your poems

but this felt too personal, too--what, who, where? Why? Wherefore? You get the picture:) It's personal but also obscure, you know? x

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by bogusagain01/26/11

Don't..

..you just hate it when that happens!

I love these little poems, they take me back to the pop poets of the 60s. Minute slices of life revealing the tragi-comic nature of our mundane existence.

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by UnderYourSpell01/26/11

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Isn't this why men call women darling?

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