by calibeachgirl
This story is exceptional. You are just plain talented.
Five stars, of course.
Keep just him and Bethany together...I'm a sucker for sweet love stories, but I do want him to get his justice. You've given them all such life.
please bring Eliza a good man. Maybe a good black man 2 spice things up tho his race doesn't matter.
love the story it got so much kindness and a touch of sadness
awesome writing so creative the story some with what different's to most stories on literica a world away. yes i like it.