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buttersbuttersabout 13 years ago
nice couple of phrases here

that aren't run-of-the-mill

Lips on a puckered bud

Inflamed by the hiss of desire

Tangled in passion

Esperanza_HidalgoEsperanza_Hidalgoabout 13 years ago
a knote to the editer

as chippy said, some noteworthy stuff THAT is good reading. It is the simplicity of voice THAT often comes out in what you write. I can see the images that you share, my beautiful friend. Please dun't edit thes comente.

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