All Comments on 'The Highway Man'

Your story isn't a bad one, but you should have it edited for grammar mistakes. Makes it harder to read.

had no problems reading the story, some people are just too anal

nice story but "she left untarnished" i dont think so, he took the one valuable thing she had lol

I think I may have to send your story to my wife... I have my tricot, my cape and my flintlock pistol in my closet, ready to feed an active imagination! Ah, now where can I find a cave? lol!

PostScriptor

Could have been a bit longer; more sex, more detail with the two of them