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another boring rhyming poem....

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by Anonymous

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by CuddlyAl03/08/11

Feelin' good was easy

Unpretentious and effective.

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by vrosej1003/08/11

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Hard to take seriously because the rhyme makes it come over flippant. Rhyming poetry has a place; it's not next to serious content. This is not a personal attack, I just thing your energies could be better directed.

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by vrosej1003/08/11

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Check green's poem above you and reread yours; you'll get what I mean.

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by twelveoone03/08/11

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5 but I question the title, my reading of this is it is supposed to be flip, esp the toss away lines at the end.

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by kstarnes03/09/11

hard to take

missus roses poems that r so cryptic they r not even understandable at least your poem makes sense.

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by butters03/10/11

agree with the flippant sound to this

that exists because of your chosen boppy kind of beat... i can imagine someone doin' their walk down the street to this rhythm.

as for the poem, well, i think it has more depth than first appears. it grows on me the more i read it.

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