All Comments on 'Negative Space Ch. 02'

I look forward to seeing where this goes.

Looking forward to see where your story goes - it's very promising so far although the chapters could do with being a little longer perhaps.

Anyway enjoying it so far so please continue

As a reader, I know your story could go in any one of a hundred different directions. I feel spellbound waiting to discover just where you're headed.

You perfectly captured the ennui of cash-strapped life in the summer heat. Made me recall my own years of anticipation in NYC.

Can't wait for more negative space.

GE

Definitely an interesting tale...can't wait to see which direction you'll take it in! Can't wait for more updates!!

I like this story. It took 2 chapters to defiantly make up my mind, now having decided I'm moving on to chapter 3 which has already posted.

I love Theo's odd vulnerability. Why, I wonder? Does he need to be touched?

Such short chapters! We want more! I wonder though, why did Lana keep in touch with her cheating ex for so long? It makes me wonder if she has serious self esteem problems. Miranda on SATC sums up my feelings on this issue: "We didn't work out. You need to not exist." Especially under circumstances like Lana's where the other party cheated. Multiple times. With different women. But I'm nitpicking--this is a small part of an otherwise extremely well written and intriguing story. Please keep going!!

I LOVE IT!!! I love the pace, I love the style of writing, I love the characters :) I can't wait to see how this turns out!!! This is the best story I've read in a long while! :)