What a great story! I very much enjoy your writing. Hope to read more!
Amazing reader!! and a beautiful story. Loved the difference between your portrayal of the very earthly man and the ethereal female character - the consistent terminology in describing them was wonderful.
Thank you both for sharing it
I have never read nor heard a story told so well, so poetically, it was a true joy to read/listen to, which I cannot say about anyother story I have read, this was simply amazing.
But would have been better in a conversational form....
Wow, great story. Certainly not the regular type of Lit offering. And such a talented voice. So professional sounding.
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