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by photoman4u205/11/11

Wonderful story!

What a great story! I very much enjoy your writing. Hope to read more!

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by audiodiva05/12/11

Hmmmm

Amazing reader!! and a beautiful story. Loved the difference between your portrayal of the very earthly man and the ethereal female character - the consistent terminology in describing them was wonderful.

Thank you both for sharing it

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by Anonymous05/13/11

A Masterpiece

I have never read nor heard a story told so well, so poetically, it was a true joy to read/listen to, which I cannot say about anyother story I have read, this was simply amazing.

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by Anonymous05/15/11

very detailed...

But would have been better in a conversational form....

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by CuriousAusGal11/23/12

Wow, great story. Certainly not the regular type of Lit offering. And such a talented voice. So professional sounding.

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