All Comments on 'Human Doll'

What a neat story... interesting and arousing. You're very talented!

You wrote an excellent story with developed personalities. You created motion with the project and her persona. But, you ended it as if it were just a stroke story just stopped after they climax.

I hope that you plan to continue this story or you should flesh out the ending a bit.

Many thanks, Ttom

I agree with the first two comments completely. Story of the month and contender for tops of 2011. Now that the project's funding is assured, how about further testing with other female beauties? There are plenty of university students and married women willing to be tested for college credit or a few bucks. Come on, do it for science.

I actually felt repulsed as I read this. The level of hatred towards women made me feel ill.

potential for a part 2 :)

Sorry you read it that way for it wasn't meant to be hatred at all. Besides, with these stories you shouldn't read too deeply into them.

great lead to a continuous story

I've guiltily enjoyed your other stories, but this was rather frightening. Your desire to subjugate and degrade women more pronounced--"happy, contented dolls?"

"I've guiltily enjoyed your other stories, but this was rather frightening. Your desire to subjugate and degrade women more pronounced--"happy, contented dolls?"

There are grown women who dress up as dolls and refer to themselves as such, it's a fetish much like BDSM and "rape play" or in this case non-consent. If your going to read anything in the non-consent (let's be honest non-consent= rape) section of an erotica site your going to be reading about the subjugation and degrading of women and girls...please don't read anything from this section if it offends you in anyway.

This story has amazing potential. I love the pure objectifying and the immediate degradation of a strong woman into a living doll.

Makes me wish there were some truth to this "project".

-A Willing Doll

Brilliant story, just brilliant!!

I guess it was a rewrite to slut of the exec. There really are more of us sluts then most people realize, because many try to hide it.