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by KAnneMeinel
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estragonalmost 13 years agoToo Much
The writing is too jumbled to quibble. It's all clutch-and-grab. I don't see the characters or the reason for the passion. And the sentence structure is really very poor. You can do much better. This is disappointing after "Against the Car".
Anonymousabout 12 years agoGood as always
I like your writing, and I thoroughly enjoyed this story, keep it up! :)
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