by podga
Ugg...this chapter was too short. And I'd really like you to end in real life sometimes rather than in the past. It feels like the past should be used as a tool to let us see how they got where they are and let us learn more about them, but that the story is about the present so start and end there.
Your characters are very real--and likeable. I love the jusxtaposition of the past and present. You're doing a doing a great job of keeping me engaged in both stories at the same time. Very well told. Can't wait for more.
--Ally
OMG, the deal with the socks was funny! And I did cringe at the part when he yelled about leaving him. I don't know which one of them was more shocked over that.