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by PennLady07/11/11

Way too fast

This was a decent (if probably overdone) premise, but it moved too fast. First she's nervous, then she's acting like she's done this before. And I have to say, your dialogue punctuation is wrong and threw me off. The problem is it's consistently wrong and so draws my attention. Try again, though; there's nothing seriously wrong.

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by Anonymous07/11/11

my kind of student

every teacher needs a student like you. Very nice. Enjoyed it immensely

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by lilloulou07/12/11

Yes Penn lady.. you are right there is some small mistakes which I later realised and tried to re-submit. This was my first attempt at this kind of story. And it probably did move fast but it was a practice run shall we say.

Besides, haven't you ever been nervous before the act and then become a tiger? It is possible...

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by 1Browneyedguy07/12/11

ahhhh

Every "teacher" needs a pet like that.

Well done, sexy, would like to see it a little longer and a Part 2.

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by Sharpguy07/16/11

Nice

Well written...good character development. As a part time college instructor, you hit on one of my favorite fantasies. I look forward to additional submissions.

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