All Comments on 'Heart Shaped Box'

You drew me in quickly. It was an interesting setting, too. Now, where's the next part?

such a great seductive story, please write more about the seduction of the shy emily by the in control krystel

Enjoyed it very much. My pussy was wet and twitching, I can so relate with Emily! Hope to read more about Emily's awakening. Wish I were her!

O M G ! - My Panties Are So Wett

I Can See Why Emily Was So Excited

& Nervous.

Love To Read What/ Who "Cum's" Next

Kisses

A very hot story....I had to masturbate too as I read it....my clit was so tingly!

I wish I was Emily. I'm dying to be with a women. Excellent story....I want more

this was one of the best stories I have read in a long time

seems to beg for a second chapter.

I like the compelling qualities that lead your characters further into their fascination than they had intended. This story has that and leaves the reader with the expectation that more is to come (and come). This one, perhaps more than others I have read, seems to beg for another pass. Emily, naked, flushed and relentlessly following the guidance of the heart-shaped box. I rather think that your artistry will surpass my imagination.

I really like

This story is something else! Eroticism in spades! I got pulled in like Emily, I didn't want to let go. Well done!

If I had a wish it would be for more, sort of setting Emily free to pursue her internal and suppressed desires.

Well, You got my five.