All Comments on 'Josh's Journal'

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vestspetvestspetover 12 years ago
Good story

Great setup for an enjoyable read, but don't forget about Ezra and Brady, unless you plan on linking the stories together in College

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Continue

Please continue this story or I will cry. I love the characters and it's a great set up that could go really far.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

I CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER

SVBLIXSVBLIXover 12 years ago
OH COME ON!!!!

How can you just write one page? Are you going for torture here or what?...lol I love the story so far and really can't wait for more. Sara

Aftermath82Aftermath82over 12 years ago
I'm an old fan

Love this story.. Please post the next chapter soon

Aftermath82Aftermath82over 12 years ago
I love all your story

..and I'm still waiting the new chapter of Heaven and Hell, is there gonna be new chapter ?

Morrigans_FaolanMorrigans_Faolanover 12 years ago
Great Start!!

Can't wait for the next installment - there's something delightful about approaching this through journal entries, and I appreciate how your characterizations are like the first brush strokes of a painting. As you add the next layers everything will get more complex and richer. Nice!

William smythWilliam smythover 12 years ago
We all know

from this writers previous work where this story is going to lead us. But she makes the lead-up so very enteresting! Good start kitten to what promises to be another superb story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

bit slow , but its growing on me

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