by rpsuch
RPS is turning a great story into an ole fashioned type serial, and this was a fantastic novel and still shows promise. Is it because of the delays in the publishing format to display each chapter page by page. TK U MLJ LV NV
This is the longest/shortest story I've ever read.... I mean, I really enjoy it, but we are kinda approaching Game of Thrones timeframe here, for what amounts to basically a page a day.
To readers who are unsatisfied by one page postings: I've loved realising when rps has posted every now and then and going back to where I left off last time - ie reading more than one chapter at a time - ie don't be so impatient. I also cottoned on quite quickly to his website in his biography, where you can read many more chapters than are available on Lit. I won't say anymore to spoil the story for others, just please get the ending right rps! Many thanks
Oh, I should have realized that there would be more family. Sabrina sounds interesting, though. It is a nice comparison to the old Ashley. What might she be up to?
...at the wheel: his first run-in with eBENezer went well because he knew what to expect, even before he met him; now that he has experienced his underhanded style, jeff should know that there is going to be a plot to break them up.
sun tsu would tell jeff to keep his head out of his ass.