All Comments on 'Ticks'

... but the end was predictable.

Very cute story but it does leave the door open in real life.!* LOL

Thanks.

needs more like when they get home

and all of the people some of the time, but you can't fool sis! Great story.

Unique and erotic. Well done.

i liked the whole story bt the endind could have been different,

Except I'm not into licking someone's asshole. It reminds me of the funny story on this site where a father supposedly convinces his daughter that he can use his cock as a thermometer to take her temperature.

Great story, something I wished I had tried on my sister. It ended with needing more. I hope you write more about these two.

Great story. Look forward to more.

really enjoyed it

The sister I never had! My sisters were too much older than me and genetic revulsion was in full force. They were all out of the home before I was old enough to actually figure anything about girls anyway. I'm sure there are a few more chapters left for these siblings.

I enjoyed it initially thought the premise was a little cheesy but big brother's fast talking patter convinced little sis' on carnal level and myself plausibility -wise. I ppreciate ' the author giving me a break from reality.

Talk of being molested is a real mood killer.

I likedit I liked it

I like it a lot only one thing need a #2 so they can go on to the area for which u left out they was about to do the nasty the most best part & the story is over u left us out here in left field come on man finsh the story.

Great story! But in my opinion, the story should have ended with the following line:

"Is your spider bite okay?" she asked, her cheek just inches from my face. "Do I need to suck it again?"

At this point in the story it is abundantly clear that Bobby's sister not only understands what Bobby has been doing but that she wants to do it again.

Nothing more is needed!

Is there room for more? It was good, but i think it needs to expand. I do have to agree that the molestation thing was a little over the top, should have just left it as she is a closet nympho and had knowledge of anything sexual beyond what she lets on. Still....a great start for this story.

My cousin fell for the tick check when we were 12 after a day in the hay field with grandpa. What fun it was too, and led to many more skin checks over the years.

My Goodness, I actually came from this one. I'm as sick as the brother. Now I understand the name of the Author.

Very unique, very erotic, very creative. I wish there was a follow up for this one. I really enjoy the whole cult/religious incest genre.

A great read, I feel a little guilty about enjoying this but I suppose I'm also a sick f***.

I didn't like the molested part, you needed something.

Great story.

That was a very entertaining flip flop on behalf of the sister. Good job!!