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My Wife's First BBC

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by Anonymous

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by passionfever209/09/11

My kind of story

This being your first story, I will tell you that you are going to get some abrasive comments, especially from Anonymous.
Don't let them discourage. You did a good job, and the content of the story is one that I like and am familiar with.
I love bbc also and have been around the swing scene for along time.
Please write more about any of your encounters

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by playman6409/09/11

Good

I enjoyed reading, even though I'm not black. I like being the other man.

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by Anonymous09/09/11

oh yeah, good reading

I wish I was your lucky wife.

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by happipat09/09/11

They do enjoy it, don't they?

...our little hussies.

My wife has fucked a few black guys in our time together, but the biggest cock she has had (and she's had a few) was actually a white one!

It was gloriously big, but, best for me, as I watched his cock entering her lovely pussy, I was fucking his unbelievably tiny lady!

Anyway, true or not, it was a nice story.

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by Anonymous09/09/11

And people wonder why the divorce rate is so high in todays world...smh pathetic

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by Anonymous09/09/11

GREAT

That was a very good story. Keep it UP.....

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by Anonymous09/09/11

,,,DEANNA IS SO HORNY NOW & ACCEPTS HER "DREAM JOB" OFFER !!!

,, Good writing uncovering her real sexual desires, so write some stories about Deanna's job as the beach bar's erotic F*** masseuse at the African obese nudist swinger's resort,,she is popular & averages 20 30 minute "sessions" per day & is live on the internet 24/7,,Deanna Loves mounting the hugely hung Nigerian basketball players massive cocks,,all thanks to Dave & Mark,,see if you find Deanna at msg19.com or tricky maseur.com,,Looking forward to Deanna's hot humping "massage" stories,,, thanks .....

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by BlackRexxx09/09/11

MORE PLEASE.

Story is great. I smell a new series.
My Wife First BBC series.

That would be really great.
Asian wife next?
Then switch to latin wife.
The choices are endless.

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by lin4_6909/09/11

oh yes

i loved it that is how it is really with bbc , iknow she must be getting more of it soon

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by kathy2b4609/09/11

wonderful

i loved it so hot , great job sucking his cock and telling how it really is also when u take all of a big cock like him inmouth and pussy

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by Anonymous09/09/11

Excellent story, but you'll have to learn to live with the negative comments these type of stories earn, there's a lot of tossers out there! I've been fortunate enough to watch my woman being hard fucked by big black cock and we both love it, especially Sue - I wonder why!? Keep on writing. Ken

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by Anonymous09/09/11

oh look at all your admirers

they all think like you, a wife a black dick and woooops a super story.

bullshit you have no clue. to many mistakes.

first cliches over cliches

second not just a couple of dummies, no with children.
who are you to think this is erotic when kids have to carry the burden of degenerated adults with an IQ lower than a plant?

and so on and so on. the plot is less exciting than a cheap pornflick. please don't ask your friends to write how good you are before you write something really good.

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by Anonymous09/09/11

re: there's a lot of tossers out there

Yeah. They're the morons who don't like people with different opinions.

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by Jerrycurious09/09/11

Excellent Story

Good story. My wife and I have been there so I can say that. Very realistic. A few errors on spelling but over all, good read. Hope to see more from you.

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by cheryl_4fun09/09/11

HOT

so real, i am surprised it only lasted a few times,
i love that BBC and want it every week, can not help it so fullfilling , only husband not know, i still remember my first and it just gets better , waiting and next encounter

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by mstrb7709/09/11

Great story and details.

It is a real nice site to see you wife get a big black cock in her cunt isn't. I have seen it many times. My wife enjoys the attention she gets from black men. She wore clothing to reveal her nice tits (39dd) braless, and no panties so a short dress allows her to show her shavn cunt to black men.
write if you'd like to hear more
mstrb77@yahoo.com

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by Anonymous09/10/11

Yikes

If this is your idea of erotic than you really are a sick little fuck. You really don't think much of yourself, your marriage or your family. And the little wife doesn't think much of you, you jack your little dick while some guy fucks her? W.T.F.

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by Anonymous09/10/11

great

This was a great story. Ignore the haters.

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by mexbearlll09/10/11

good story

Don't worry about the ones who don't like it........

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by Anonymous09/10/11

Only a pussy let's his wife another man in front of him then jerks....weaklings deserve to lose their women

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by 2275jr09/10/11

taking all of his big black cock

brilliant first story ,. so very hot and horny.
my full attention in more ways than one all i can say is more please .

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by 1LuckyRob09/10/11

Wonderful!!

I loved your story! It reminded me of the first time I had a BBC and well, I had to call my friend and ask him to come over and take care of me again:)... Please write more and don't pay any attention to the haters. Annie

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Two things...

Stories like this can be much more believable and much more erotic if you give the black guy (or the white guy, if that's the case) a cock that is only a little bigger than average. Contrary to what internet porn tells us most black cocks are the same size as white cocks. Make your black guy an incredible lover if you want, but give him a realistic dick. A ten inch pecker just screams cliché.

In terms of your writing skills, you need to learn to use contractions as a means of making your dialogue less stilted.
"Hi, I am Mark" is better as "Hey, I'm Mark." Dialogue will make or break a story, and good dialogue has to read as someone might speak. I have never in my life introduced myself by saying "Hi, I am Harry. I am very happy to meet you."

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by mikej72809/12/11

mmmmmmmmmmm

So hot, I glad your wife enjoyed her first black dick and seems to me she will have many more.

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by Anonymous12/21/11

My fantasy too

If this is true you are a brave man. I would love to witness my wife's first BBC. My biggest problem is how to break the ice with her

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by tirreno1202/25/12

Nice

Nice slutty wife tale

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by Anonymous04/24/12

threesome

we have met many black guys for threesomes etc,just like the blackguy in the story if i was to tell you the story of when we met this black guy with the biggest cock i/we have ever seen,and for june to feel it inside her.this guy was huge to be compared to a rolling pin. i dont think many would believe me but his cock had to be seen to believed and not to be repeated as yet as this guy came from malta met him by chance,but as june says once is lots better than none.june will openly admit she was very intimidated at first but she says it turned out to be the best sex ever (good job i dont get jealous)........lol.

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by Anonymous12/11/13

hello

How are you
googeef@hotmail.com

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by Anonymous07/19/14

A bbc dream

Would be awesome to do a threesome with a huge black cock ravaging my white pussy!

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by angelaslater11/27/14

Loved it

A fantastic story but would of loved a little more dialogue of how she reacted and her thoughts. An amazing story though :)

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