All Comments on 'Kenny Ch. 02'

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Socially_IneptSocially_Ineptover 12 years ago
So far, so good.

This seems very interesting. I wonder why Consuela was sad though. I guess I'll find out in the next chapter.

WerewolfEnthusiastWerewolfEnthusiastover 12 years ago
loving it

i'm pretty sure i know the reason behind consuelas sad expression, but i dont think it would be fair if i wrote it an spoiled its progression of revealment. but anyway loving this story so far can't wait to read more from you.

LoneStarRiderLoneStarRiderover 12 years ago
Better!

Much improved over #01 (no offense intended). Now, this is becoming a delightful story.

tazz317tazz317over 12 years ago
THE THEME HAS BEEN PRE-PLANNED

and into the breach walks the helper. TK U MLJ LV NV

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