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Natural Insemination

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous10/11/11

Yet again

Why did she marry him? If he is so small and can't please her why the fuck did she marry him? That is the stumbling block here. And as many a sixteen year old mother will say you don't need much penetration to get pregnant.

No just another boring author with another weak husband being manipulated into a full blown WACC. After the kid is born she will continue to be a slut and he will get nothing.

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by Anonymous10/11/11

It has a very good beginning cant wait for the rest

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by Anonymous10/11/11

Another Man Hater........

The doc is undoubtedly a female lover.....in more than one way.

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by Anonymous10/11/11

This is fiction and

it's quite humorous. Of course you don't need a big cock to impregnate a woman, but this is a story and that is the plot. So just laugh along with the writer, and she writes quite well. Don't take it personally. Everyone knows anonymous commenters are very manly and have big cocks, always get revenge, and never allow their possessions to be used by other men. This story is about some other guy, not one of us, and he has a small cock and a hot wife. It is happening to someone else, someone the writer created. It could never really happen to any of us, could it?

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by huedogg10/11/11

another WACC loving man-hater

and her husband is was such a pussy and she was wanton slut...1 star

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by Anonymous10/11/11

Terrific and Fun!

Five Stars! Great writing, wonderful plot, fantastic story! There had better be a continuation of this one. Can't wait for the details. Thank you, Jenny

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by magmaman10/11/11

Cute

Not very realistic but who cares. The dipping into emotions and thoughts kept in check saves it from being silly and pretty good writing adds to the mix.
Yes, cute, worth the five I give it for being a bit different.
Thanks,
MGM

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by Anonymous10/11/11

really belongs in humor

actually very funny

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by Sidney4310/11/11

Funny

Written with a great sense of understatement and humor, that gradually builds in intensity. I am waiting for the next chapter when we find out that Jason was also black, but no one wanted to broach that subject, at least not in this chapter.

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by Anonymous10/11/11

Please, if it is not a complete story, put "Chap 1" in title.

But I love it, can't wait for more.

Jason

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by Anonymous10/11/11

sounds like another wimp cuckhold story

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by LordSlamdawgg10/11/11

Better then Expected (though I didn't expect much) !

This reads like a Saturday Night Live skit back when it was good I could see Tina Fey playing this np. I know she's moved on but haven't watched show in years. Take this to nearest 2nd City venue for audition.

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by Anonymous10/11/11

wonderful, excellent, creative . . .

and pretty darn erotic!

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by Roge472xal10/11/11

Great Humour

A lot of fun, and much more to come, I very much hope. Well Done! :-)

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by betrayedbylove10/11/11

Legal Brothel

Sounds like the madam pimping out her studs for a fee. I can open an office like that without being a doctor. This better get better because I hate wasting time but I have to see it through.

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by Anonymous10/11/11

very good story

...and I would like to know how their sex-life is going on after the impregnition of the young stud.

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by Anonymous10/11/11

Outstanding

I think that the doctor should have measured the husband during the session. Cuckold stories are my favorite. My husband does not know it but all of our children are from another man...similar looking, but much better equipped ;)

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by 2275jr10/11/11

having what she would love

what a fantastic hot horny story . this is.
natural insemination this story was awesome. cant wait to read the next part of this very erotic story. out standing story. as well as the writing if it.

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by Duna10/11/11

Humorous. Some women's sexual dream a baby from a handsome capeble guy and the real husband to be used to bring up the baby or the babies secretly. However the DNA test is almost 100% and the paternity is money question for the husbands today. In the story this happen with mutual agreemant.
It may have been the one of causes when the Toba supervulcano erupted 74000 years ago and all homo sapiens sapiens remained only 500 person in Africa, the all male Y chromosom origin from 1 man. (The other cause is the gender affect=if you have only dauthers the Y cromosom extinct (it is same to the mitocondrional DNA but the mDNA woman inheritted only)).

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by ILienBagby10/11/11

Absolutely fabulous

start. This reader will be checking every day to see if the next chapter has been submitted. Concept is fascinating, writing is fine, possibilities are endless.

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by Anonymous10/11/11

5 Stars from me!! This is an extremely well written and hot story. I love the cuckold theme and the hotwife who's drooling at the thought of being fucked senseless by a young, hung stud, to be ultimately bred by him. The wimp husband's already being manoeuvered by both the Doctor and his wife into fully accepting his wife being bred by a young Bull. I for one will be eagerly awaiting the next chapter(s) - let's hope this story is long and very detailed! Ken

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by Gus Aspar10/11/11

Nice story

Doctor Palin... hmmm... brunette, spectacles?... yes, very promising!

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by EspressoBolus10/11/11

Silly stuff

Could be interesting to those who dig the cuckold stories.

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by Anonymous10/11/11

pride

if he has any pride he should go ahead and start the divorce unless he is ready to be a cuckold because he is heading there

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by Anonymous10/11/11

Um...what did she say? Two hours?

With Jason, that good-looking young stud?

Whew...is it getting warm in here?

How many children did you say you wanted, honey?

Hmmm....how much sick days do I have left?

Sorry...I seem to have wet your chair....

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by Anonymous10/11/11

Can't Wait!!

looks like it could be great! Already sounds pretty interesting, with lots of potential for twists. You could go anywhere with this.

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by Anonymous10/11/11

all you bitchers know you're commenting on a piece of fiction right! a damn horny story it is too,can't wait!

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by socal123610/12/11

Seriously

This is an erotic website and still narrow minded bigots. Your fetish is not mine but I am so sick of the hate for others go to thing. Hater suck.

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by Anonymous10/12/11

hey socal1236

This may be an erotic website but it is also a public forum. Those of us who want to be cucks but loathe ourselves for it have a right to express our opinion also. The erotic part for us is reading about creampies, cuckoldry and humiliation; it is the way we get turned on.

The WBC (wannabecuck) club has many members and we must read these stories, jerk off, then in a fit of self-loathing comment negatively - it is just the way we roll.

WBC4EVER

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by demantoid10/12/11

clever, fun and funny.

I am impressed that the author can keep the tongue in cheek exposition believable (barely) and stimulating. Well written!

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by AnotherChance10/12/11

Very good! Loving it so far!

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by oubobcat10/13/11

Got me hooked

Can't wait to see where this goes and the hot action that will in sew. :)

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by Anonymous10/13/11

Phenomenal

This is excellent writing. Keep it up.

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by Scarecrow5110/15/11

Humiliation

is a turn off not a turn on.

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by Drmaxc10/17/11

Excellent

Very well executed. Most amusingly done and with a delightful use of words - 'procedure' indeed!

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by Anonymous10/29/11

A load of .....

Medically speaking pure BS! But, dream on ladies! Yes, there is that perfect stud out there who can bang you for two hours straight...but...better bring a book!

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by digdaddyrich11/07/11

I think the wife will like the procedure more than her husband

The little woman is about to experence what it is to be fucked by a real man.

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by Anonymous11/13/11

wow, i like the idea of this procedure ^^. you should really write more - i want to know what happens!

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by Anonymous12/02/11

Brilliant and very sexy. Please keep writing!

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by Anonymous04/10/12

The Beast

My favorite elements: seduction, discovery, and loss of innocence.

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by javmor7907/19/13

Hilarious

Normally I hate stories that aren't based in reality, but this one gets two thumbs up!!! I know women with little dick husbands wish this were true. This hospital would have women everywhere claiming that pregnancy was an issue and they need "medical" help. If any guy doesn't find the humor in this story he has to have a little dick. Yes this story is written by a woman and is obviously making fun of us guys, but this site is full of stories making fun of woman. This is a cuck story in disguise. I for one am very amused by this story joking on little dick men.

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by Tootight106/11/14

reality

I feel sorry for the guy, once she has a taste, she will not be the same. divorce her, get a smaller female. I know all the big cock guys are saying yes, but what if the shoe was on the other foot? I wont even read the rest of the stories, sorry

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by Anonymous11/03/14

Stupid feminist drivel !

"1*" !!

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