All Comments on 'Paige Ch. 01'

please keep it going

dont you dare stop the story here ,you must keep the story going

One of the best written, most erotic, most exciting stories I have read. Now, continue. PLEASE.

Don't keep us waiting too long.

can't wait to read more

Can't wait to hear more. Very sensual story, wish I knew how much fun girls were when I was in high school!

Keep writing please!

Thanks for a great story. I (and many others) can't wait to read more. Looks like the AP English class payed off in more ways than one.

A very nice starting build up to a sweet love story that I feel might get pretty steamy in the next chapter. Looking forward to more.

Ok, ok, please keep going! Seduction is sooooooooo wonderful

Thank you all for the kind words and the encouragement. I am working on Chapter II, so it won't be too much longer before it's up.

Dani:

Your writing is very, very good !! You allow the reader to visualize what you're writing about and let them take that next step mentally before you continue. Your style is very erotic without being in-your-face brash and the flow of your story is incredible. I can't wait to see where Chapter 2 leads ! :)

I agree with every thing druce19 said. Thank you for sharing your story and please hurry with the next chapter!!!

Omg, hurry with the next chapter! This was amazing!

...and i am curious what will happen next.

Chapter I is a great read Dani. It was easy to visualize it as I read along and I am eager to read Chapter II. So get with it already! ;)

Great work Dani! Looking forward to chapter 2 already! Keep up the great work :)

My Fuctress hath written a great story. I can't wait for chapter 2 and the sleep over. Keep it up.

Love the way you started out, building on a very familiar scene to most of us. Can't wait to see it unfold.

Beautifully realized! WHere is part 2!!!!!???? Please, please . . . can't wait!

Well? Where is the next chapter then? That was hot and there most definitely needs to be more.

I've been waiting so long for chapter 2. Please don't leave us hanging. This one has some great possibilities.

It seemed a little...contrived? It lost me about half way through. But the mentor idea was good.