All Comments on 'The Trade'

by smokinggun

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tazz317tazz317over 12 years ago
SOMETHING IS NOT RIGHT IN HOME LIFE

WHERE-WHY-WHAT-WHEN DID THIS ALL HAPPEN, OVER NITE OR OVER TIME. TK U MLJ LV NV

teh568teh568over 12 years ago
Something Is Missing

Where did this idea from the wife come from? Why would she risk her marrige with her husband (not knowing if he would enjoy it or not)? It sounds like a set up. Maybe, she taped it or is planning to give his ass to a "MALE" gay friend of hers. We need another chapter to figure it out.

sphilsphilover 12 years ago
Good Thing

This was pretty short...I didn't waste too much time on it.

4starz4starzover 12 years ago
excellent premise... hidden desires

good start

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
good short story.

This is exactly the treatment many men need. The quiet ones sometimes have a dominant streak, when it comes to the surface it is amazing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Bad ending

I started reading this cause it started out with a good idea. Too bad you followed up with such a poor story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Truth is in the details

Too much of a "slam. bam, thank you maam" story. Didn't go any place after the ass fuck.

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