All Comments on 'A Tangled Web Ch. 12'

Many thanks to those few of you who have stuck with this story. I hope you felt it was worthwhile. I'm taking a break from Literotica but I'll still be writing and one day...

Worthwhile? ABSOLUTELY! Write away MissLisaJones ... and come back to us.

Thanx for your stories.

Ghere

I beg you, reconsider. You have brought so much pleasure to so many readers here. Whatever you decide, please accept my best wishes for success in all your future endeavors.

My own selfishness makes me say that I hope your "temporary hiatus" is indeed temporary (and measured in months rather than years!). The world needs more story-tellers, and story-tellers with a bit of spice are even nicer!

Thank you so much for a great read. Great characters, story line, everything. Please write more , when you are ready. Your fans await with anticipation. Thanks

I absolutely loved this. Kept checking in everyday until I realized U posted every other day ( the 1st 8 chapters..)

All your stories are great! I really do mean this :|

Take all the break U need.....but come back (and don't stay away too long)

Cheers!

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Estragon said it the very best. We all love you Miss Lisa Jones!

im sorry 4 been late to comment on this wonderful story.I lost my Literotica pword and i don't wanna comment as an anonymous. I just wanna say this story is one of the best storys I've ever read and thank you 4 posting it.

..when i should have been working. Really enjoyed it. Balance of story with eroticism was just right. You are a good writer. Thank you.

I would have liked to see Yin live just to see what happened between the three of them. It would have made the story richer because love is never as simple as you made it. Just a comment from a non-writer who still thinks this story is one of the best.

Also, I think one or two of the important sex scenes should have been a little more explicit to augment the depth of the love involved. I find that the pleasure is part of the binding and love remains a little distant if it is not there.

MLJ, I want to commend you for a most enjoyable story. Skillfully written, with realistic characters and action.

Speaking immodestly as some what of a historian, I thought Tangled Web came a lot closer to accurate history then most of the stories on this site, in that genre.

Which regurgitate the usual hollywooded blunders that are so popular for mass consumption by the gullible.

I am looking forward to future postings. Or, by any chance do you have any ebooks for sale online? If so good you paste in a URL to your Author's page?

This is the first story which I'd read on Lit, and amazingly I've stumbled across it again!

Your storytelling is incredible, and not only have I throughly enjoyed it, but your uniqueness breathes volumes.

Thank you MLJ

At last a writer who can spin a good yarn, who can actually write without annoying and distracting spelling or grammatical howlers, who realises that her adult readers don't need to be taught the mechanics of sex, that 'less is more' in erotica. Thank you.

Hard to follow.