All Comments on 'Shower Surprise'

Enjoyed but u should put up a warning for MM(malemale) next time u witer good luck

This wasn't meant to be a War and Peace-like novel of perfect writing style and content, it was meant as a personal release of my fantasy side. I'm assuming most of you are on Literotica for the same reason I am, "self-satisfaction", not looking for the next Pulitzer Prize novel. I'm sorry if the content and style (or, lack thereof) is sorely lacking and disappointing to you. It was a fantasy of mine, nothing more, nothing less. It wasn't going up for a prize in any writing category or anything else other than a personal, selfish, fantasy for my own (and, I had hoped on some level, someone else's) self-satisfaction. I'm sorry if I've offended anyone with this "story".

This is a literotica piece that i liked and for all of you leaving crude comments, no one forced you to read

There are some very, very angry people on this website. I will try to figure out how to "label" this story as male-male so those of you that somehow don't notice the, ".. stroking myself.." in the second paragraph don't waste your precious time.

Not only was this story incredibly hot, but I really enjoyed your writing style, too. 5 stars, my friend! And for the record, I loathed War and Peace...

I've got my computer set to go straight to the new M/M stories, so I didn't notice that it's not marked as "Gay." Of course the first line of the intro says it's about men having sex with men, so I don't see what the problem is/was. It's a good story, although I've got a hunch you can do better. Looking forward to more of your stories.

I read a lot of stories written as the first person account of receiving anal sex. Yours was a great one. Thanks for a great way to start my morning. :)

Lol, the tags are just generic Buttcheeks777 tags – no pissing in this story :D

Oh man, I apologize for my tag of "pissing" for this story! GAA! Not good, sorry about that, I added this one to a template of another story that had that tag line in it. Shoot, sorry about that, folks. My apologies.

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What a true exciting story. I'm hard as a rock and dripping precum. Very hot !!