All Comments on 'A Techies Wonderland Ch. 01'

I really liked it, set up for many more chapters

Liked the story, I'm looking forward to chapter 2+

Jerry in Washington state, USA - I was recently re-reading some of your stories, so it was nice to come across a new one. I enjoyed this first chapter, mainly because I had figured out the sexual teasing was at least partly a test to see if he could keep his mind (and body) on the job. I look forward to future chapters where he is able to relax and enjoy the sexual results of the teasing. I'm not a computer techie, but I enjoyed the technical parts of the story - made everything else in the story feel more real. Much look forward to chapter 2!!

I think the title pretty much says it all.

I'm a techie and this is a great fantasy! Looking forward to what's coming up.

Awesome story loved it looking forward to more !!!!

Great start...looking forward to morre

A great intro to what may lay ahead.. can't wait to read on.

Great story, can't wait to see where this will go

Nice lead in. Been waiting for another series from you. Looking forward to it.

i like the story, lots of places for thos to go... more, please!

Hey! Here's hoping that there are more chapters coming cause I really like the way your wicked mind works. I'm hoping that you'll have something coming soon! Keep on writing, mate!

Where is the rest of the story ? You cannot leave it hanging after a brilliant start .

A very good beginning....are you going to continue?

great story, very inventive. i deffinitely want a job like this (smile). i can't wait to read the second installment. ------ i do hope there will be many more installments.

and thank for the enjoyment so far.

kindest regards

brian

GOOOOD start! That would be a fantasy dream for sure! Whew! Cheers!

I didn't notice any misspelled words. My mind was going crazy with these women and why I've never met any like them before now.?

I have found a new author to me . I have only read one of your stories looked up your details and found a virtual library. How good is that.

You are going to keep me very busy thank you.

This story is great by the way

I great way to start a story! Onto the other chapters:D

I wonder if he needs an assistant ? I'd even come out of retirement and work for nothing in that office - oh yes.

But unlike Chris (so far) I doubt I could be quite as 'restrained' if I were teased as he's been..............

So looking forward to chapter 2 !

As a former techie, I love this story. Please continue it. I don’t know if you have an editor, but there are a few grammatical mistakes and missing words. Also, please, please, please, change the story title to “A Techie’s Wonderland”.

This is a new one for me !!! Super hot story !!

What imagination! A women's custom clothing business as an erotic stage, with the workers being desirable, horny women! Someone's got a novel brain to produce a novel idea.

Well-written. Good dialog.

Paul in Oklahoma

Wonderful storyline. A man can only dream and I do love your stories and the way you make them feel possible.

Great concept, very well written. The best part is that every women doesn’t have breasts larger than a D cup, which I consider more a turn off than a turn on.

Love it!

Marvelous start to what I am sure will be a VERY INTERESTING series. Just like your Vvanoe guide" story, this is well planned & thought-out, plus, the Chris is a gentleman.

He does not take advantage immediately, other than looking; this is quite the draw for a number of us readers. This is not a "stroke story"; per se, but an excellent build up to the whole story!!

On, to part 2!

Lost me when the verb tense changed mid-sentence.

Has the making of a very sexy storey! ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️