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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Interesting start

Nice setup - at first I thought the story was about a task Scythe needed to accomplish; but by the end of the chapter, it has turned into the start of a possible relationship. Not sure how that would evolve, as both seem to have a dark past that they don't want to share (for good reasons, I'm sure). So the open questions are: a) what will happen at the end of the week? Will Scythe get the pages she's interested in? Or will the Viscount hold to his initial decision? b) what happens when Tala returns? How will she affect the wordplay games between Scythe and Viscount Bedlam? Hope that you'll decide to return to this story - has lots of potential and many possibilities.

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