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Dan's Mom Substitutes For Daughter Ch. 02

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by Anonymous

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Wonderfull story!

Here's why. I missed reading Chapter 1 so I read it before proceeding to Chapter 2. There were times when you had me laughing. The character, Dan... how can I put it... is so unabashedly precocious that it's precious. It's like he's cool and yet excited all at the same time. Keep going.

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by Anonymous12/29/11

Super continuation

Thanks for the series. I have often thought of my friend Trevor's mom, and this story got me thinking about her as your lead character. I laughed at some of your sly comments, about how the situation developed, and hot erotica many of the scenes were. I once stumbled across a couple doing it in the park. They were down a path like you mentioned, and I was going down to the river to fish. Was paying little attention to anything until I heard something ahead, and when I turned the corner there was a girl giving a blow job to an older guy. I didn't know what to do so I watched for a couple seconds until the guy noticed me. I turned and walked away but it was so hot seeing them. I pictured myself stumbling upon you and Dan's mom in the park!

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by Anonymous12/29/11

thanks for the follow up

I enjoyed the two characters and it was a nice touch how they ended up in the park!

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by Anonymous12/30/11

More

MORE PLEASE. There is so much more you can do with this.

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by Bjorntufuk01/18/12

Omg, you need to finish. This is so well writtem for this site.

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