All Comments on 'Becoming Obvious Ch. 02'

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MartinimanMartinimanover 12 years ago
5 Stars

This story just keeps getting better & it ended at the most erotic part. I hope the next chapter is coming soon & many more afterwards.

elle_9549elle_9549over 12 years ago
OMG why??

Why'd you have to stop THERE?? ~ L

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Great job!

Really, really great job!

sexyfox69sexyfox69about 12 years ago

MORE Please and not just 1 page we deserve at least 2 or more for the long wait

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
this was so fucking hot

please write more and tell us what happens! god i wish this wouldve happened to me in college!

secretLacesecretLaceover 6 years ago
We need more

This story really picked up and ended on a really high note. I really like how the room mate realized how she can control her with just the touch. That she is somewhat a nymfo.

Keep it going please

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
More please

Love the story, but there's no conclusion.

Please continue. Looking forward to another chapter.

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