All Comments on 'Jeremy Green Ch. 02'

God I love this story but I hate you right now for ending it right here. More, please!!!!!

please make it longer.....!

I am a huge non-fan of 1-pg. chapters. Sorry, but it seems lazy. I like the story but surely you could make it longer or combine chapters to at least write 2 pages per part.

I am going back to chapter 1 it sounded like Jacob was a good man but possessive? That is not good and who is Chris? Senility has set in lol

and u kill me with a cliffhanger, it was just getting to the climax and u ended it. lol why do u hate me so?

Jacob must understand no one OWNS anyone else........ And I bet Chris will teach him that though I do feel this Chris charecter is annoying. Lol.

Pleaseeee longer chapters. Stupid Jacob !

You killing me with ur short chapters ,i like the story so ear please write the next chapter soon and longer please

I'm fine with one page chapters but I agree, it seems kinda lazy. I wish you'd actually wrIte the part about the Bahamas to connect it rather than just mentioning it. It would help us better get an idea of Jacob's personality (e.g. He's romantic but controlling) and Jeremy's seemingly unconditional love for him. Your writing is good and I look forward to all your cliffhangers - don't change that. Just... Connect your stories. When I read it, I was confused. I thought I came in on the wrong chapter. But seeing as how there's only two... Anyway: Connect. Them.

has Jennifer Hudson said " well i don't like , living under your spotlight just because u think i might , find somebody worthy "

Jacob needs to understand he doesn't own any1 nobody likes to be owned ..i think he's obsessed with Jeremy .

has a fucking screw loose....it reminds me of an ex twenty years ago .. for weeks he pushed me around till one day i got mad and floored the twat with a frying pan... ..it takes me a while to get mad .? otherwise i am just a big softy.? lol

he needs to get it that he is the problem .