All Comments on 'Azure Planet Ch. 01'

An intriguing start, I look forward to reading more

on your first story to Lit. You are off to an interesting start and I look forward to chapter 2 to see just where you are taking this story. Good luck and again congrats on your first story.

I hope you all will enjoy it. I'm hoping to have chapter 2 and 3 out in the next day or so. I'm battling a wicked double ear infection and I'm nearly completely deaf at the moment, so I'm trying to use the down time to my advantage!

Spelling error: "barrings" should be " bearings"

Personal pronoun error: "could find me her" should be "could find her"

Now after that I find that you are doing well for your first story; I am intrigued as to how and when we get off world. I was sorry to hear that you are under the weather, get better before you tackle more-ears can be tricky with balance and therefore your concentration. 3.5 of 5

Sorry your not well - more please, I would say this was a really good epilogue - interested to read more.

I submitted chapter two last night, so it should be posting Tuesday or Wednesday.Thank you all for the well wishes. I'm on the mend thanks to a good amount of antibiotics.

I greatly enjoyed your sensual description of Lyra's body and self-pleasure. I hope you'll keep this up!

Dear BatteriesNotIncluded,

I am very sorry to hear about your ear infection,

a very painfull ordeal and I hope it ends very

quickly.

This story is gonna be VERY interesting! like some

very far out experience super natural?

no one has ever had and the way the story

started is really nice..

I know you will get a gr8 rating!